Beautiful pencil work!

Maybe one or two compositional/perspective oddities, but I really like it!

I love it! are you gonna color this?

i just love it! wonderful work!!

It just looks lively .

Nice pencil work

FR : Très joli travail.
Deux remarques cependant.
La première concerne le bras de la damoiselle. il semble un peu trop fin. On le remarque en particulier au niveau de l'épaule. Ceci dit, je ne suis pas trop habitué au style manga c'est peut être normal
La seconde remarque concerne le point de fuite de ta perspective, la table et le barbecue ne semblent pas avoir exactement le même. Et bien que je suppose que pour la maison et le muret le point de fuite est bon, il y a quand même quelque chose qui fait bizzare

J'aurais mis 8/10 si j'avais pu donc je met 7/7 puisque c'est mon maximum.

Nice perspective and use of white space to add a nice sense of balance to the piece. The selective use of darker shadowing and details of the two characters creates a draw to them, well done.

really great job 10+

Good work +7/9

This is a lovely scene demonstrating some serious pencil skills.

You've almost pulled off the tricky double perspective...what destroys the illusion is that we're looking UP at the girl when she's in that portion of the picture where we're looking DOWN on everything else.

I'm not keen on those rocks behind the girl either...they echo the angle of her bag and legs to closely and confuse the eye...they would have looked better reinforcing the background perspective in my opinion.

Despite all that this derserves more attention than it's getting...shame.

This deserves to be number one......

Cool! Nice work!

Excelllent work
+10

Amazing line work; Composition, perspective and details are all top notch.

+10